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:iconbanzatou:
READ RIGHT TO LEFT!
READ RIGHT TO LEFT!

This is a fanart manga practice of Kagamine Rin, reference to the youtube video: [link]

Page 3 of 3 of the first couple of scenes shown on the youtube video; though I'm not going to turn this into an actual chapter, merely for practice just to get the hang on making manga pages.

I don't really plan to make any more, since I want to focus on making another manga that's a fanart, but its 'original' (...or...original as it can be).

I request critiques plz, for future reference on making manga~ :iconrinishappyplz:

- Manga Studio 3.0 EX
- regular paper (sketch)

Link to page 1: [link]
Link to Page 2: [link]
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Mood: Love ~ChibiCherri Feb 5, 2010
This is super cute! Keep it up...except one thing that's bothering me is, right before I found this manga, I watched Rin and Len's recycling bin and salvage for the first time, and it surprised me :D It must have been fate! Are you going to continue this manga?
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~Banzatou Feb 15, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Haha, I actually was motivated in re-creating the recycling bin through the manga, but only for practice~

I don't plan to continue the manga, but if enough people told me to continue it, I'm all for it~ :XD:
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~Digi-Computer Nov 13, 2009  Student Artist
:iconjoshuaishappyplz: Keep It Up!
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*SkySky25 Jun 10, 2009
I love it! keep the great comic up!
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~animelovebr Apr 30, 2009
My only suggestion is that you use that comic font... Wild Words Roman... :)
Oh, and try to use more patters too
But it's great *-*
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~Banzatou May 4, 2009  Student Digital Artist
Thanks for the advices love, I appreciate it. ^^

And I don't know if I've seen a comic font called Wild Words Roman... :O
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~animelovebr May 7, 2009
This font is easy to find, specially in Manga editing tutorials.
I always edit manga using it ^^ If you want i can send you by e-mail.
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~Lithe-Furon Apr 6, 2009
i like the layout of the page but i just can't help not liking the last panel! You drew her so well form the begining, but it looks like if you tried to mirror her face in the last panel, it would look weird o.O ish bugging me!!
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~EvynC Apr 5, 2009
Hmm,still very intrigued
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*sheip Apr 5, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i really love the shading and the panel job! this is coming out really well! you just might be my sempai when it comes to making manga! <3
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